Paige, this is a beautiful poem and I enjoyed your use of descriptive language with charcoal, onyx and obsidian really setting the scene for the darkness of space. I like how you mentioned the weightlessness of the moon and added the famous quote “one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind” as that is what Neil Armstrong said as he took his first step onto Luna soil. Very good job, I quite enjoyed this post! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Paige, this is a beautiful poem and I enjoyed your use of descriptive language with charcoal, onyx and obsidian really setting the scene for the darkness of space. I like how you mentioned the weightlessness of the moon and added the famous quote “one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind” as that is what Neil Armstrong said as he took his first step onto Luna soil. Very good job, I quite enjoyed this post!
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates