Kia ora Paige, this is a very good venn diagram and I can tell you researched the two aviators well. They are two very amazing women who did great things for women as they were aviators in an era when it was believed women were unable to pilot at all, let alone solo! I would suggest combining your second comparison on them being the first woman to fly over the south Atlantic and Atlantic ocean into one comment for example “they were both the first woman to fly over a section of the Atlantic Ocean” and adding a new third comparison. Keep up the great work! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Kia ora Paige, this is a very good venn diagram and I can tell you researched the two aviators well. They are two very amazing women who did great things for women as they were aviators in an era when it was believed women were unable to pilot at all, let alone solo! I would suggest combining your second comparison on them being the first woman to fly over the south Atlantic and Atlantic ocean into one comment for example “they were both the first woman to fly over a section of the Atlantic Ocean” and adding a new third comparison. Keep up the great work!
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Zana Yates